5 Dec 2023

PHL 1000| Paper Assignment on Plato’s Allegory of the Cave

 PHL 1000 / Intro to Philosophy

Section: OL1

Semester: Fall 2023

This course provides an introduction to the fundamental questions and methods of philosophy. Students will explore a variety of philosophical topics, including the nature of reality, knowledge, and morality. They will also be introduced to the history of Western philosophy and will examine the ideas of some of the most important philosophers in the Western tradition.

Plato’s Allegory of the Cave 

Paper Assignment on Plato’s Allegory of the Cave – 75 points

Due:  in BlackBoard by 11:59 pm Monday, December 4  (Submit in the Term Paper content area in the Control Panel)

I am willing to look at a rough draft of your entire paper or just parts (a) and (b), if you can get it to me by 11:59 pm on Wednesday, November 8 .  Just email it to me directly at olajrea@udmercy.edu.

Suggested length:  5 - 7 typed DOUBLE-SPACED pages (1375-1750 words).  This is just a suggestion as to length, not a hard and fast page or word count.

Introduction:  summarize what you will do in the paper in parts (a) and (b) below, and summarize briefly the impact of the Allegory of the Cave on you (about ½ - ⅔ of a page – 5 points).  

(a)  (1) Summarize the Allegory by describing the stages in the prisoner’s journey out of the Cave.  Make sure to pay attention to the initial state the prisoners are in, as well as their ‘discovery’ of the puppeteers and the cutouts.  

(2) What surprising claim does Socrates make about what Glaucon calls these “strange prisoners”? 

(3) Next, explain what kind of reality the world of the Cave represents in Plato’s thought by explaining the “two realms” in Plato’s metaphysics. The world inside the cave symbolizes one of these realms, and the world outside the cave symbolizes the other realm. (about 1 ½ - 2 pages – 20 points) 

 [You will be expanding this discussion of the two realms or kinds of reality in the next section of the paper.]

Plato’s Allegory of the Cave 

(b)  Integrating your understanding of Reading 2A, Reading 4, and Reading 4A, fully explain Plato’s metaphysical dualism. (about 1 ½ -2 pages pages – 25 points).  You should do the following FIVE things here:  

(1) explain what metaphysics is; 

(2) explain what dualism is – you should be able to produce 2-3 sentences in discussing each of these; and then. 

(3) explain the details of Plato’s specific version of dualism by describing the differences between the physical world and the world of Forms.  You must discuss both the Allegory itself as well as Reading 

4A:  how is Plato’s dualism illustrated in both of these readings?

In addition to defining metaphysics and dualism, you should be able to connect at least two of the ideas in Reading 2A (in addition to dualism) to Plato’s metaphysics, by completing tasks (4) and (5): 

(4)  choose EITHER the appearance/reality distinction OR the permanence/change issue (p. 203 of Reading 2A), explain it, and then connect it to Plato’s metaphysics, and last 

(5) state the two definitions of fundamental reality (p. 210 of Reading 2A) and connect them to Plato’s metaphysics.

(c)  Impact on you and current application to human beings:  What lessons did you learn from the Allegory of the Cave?  What impact did the reading have on you?  Did Plato’s discussion of education resonate with you?  Do you think the Allegory applies to us now? How do we mistake appearances for reality and what are the consequences of this?  (1-2 pages - 10 points)

Writing, Clarity, Style:  15 points:  Your audience here is a philosophically naïve but intelligent reader, so think about including the level of detail that will make your paper understandable to others.  One way to test this is to have someone read your paper who has not taken philosophy and see if they understand it.  All of the elements of writing will be graded:  complete sentences, proper capitalization, order of words that makes sense, proper punctuation, etc.  Developing your own original examples to illustrate ideas in the paper is always a good idea.

DO NOT include the prompts above in your paper.  The prompt is to tell you what to do; you don’t have to state the prompt itself in the paper, and doing so would detract from a smoothly flowing essay.  

If you want to divide your paper into sections, that is fine, and can be helpful.  But in that case, here is how you might name the different sections:

Introduction

Summary of the Allegory

Plato’s metaphysical dualism

Impact of Allegory of the Cave

Conclusion

Citations:  the standard way of citing any text of Plato is to give the title of the work followed by the Stephanus number.  Titles of Plato’s dialogues are like titles of books, and should be italicized.  For example, suppose that in your paper you write the following:  As Socrates said, “the visible realm should be likened to the prison dwelling…” (Republic 517b).  Notice that the period goes after the citation in parentheses.  Even if you are paraphrasing rather than quoting directly, you should use this citation format.  You can also cite other readings in the body of the paper using the reading number (e.g, 2A) and page number within the reading, and give the complete citation information in a works cited page.


Here is the citation information you need – I’m including here those readings that you may want or need to cite.  You can copy this information directly to your works cited page :

  • Reading 1:  (pp. 4-9)  What is Philosophy? William F. Lawhead.  The Philosophical Journey:  An Interactive Approach, 5th edition.  Boston: McGraw-Hill 2011
  • (pp. 10-11):  From Landscape of Wisdom: A Guided Tour of Western Philosophy by Christopher Biffle. Boston, MA:  McGraw Hill, 1999.
  • Reading 4:  Plato.  Republic.  Translated by G.M.A. Grube, revised by C.D.C. Reeve. Indianapolis:  Hackett Publishing Company, Inc. 1992.
  • Reading 4A:  Plato’s Metaphysics:  Divine Forms.  From Landscape of Wisdom: A Guided Tour of Western Philosophy by Christopher Biffle. Boston, MA:  McGraw Hill, 1999.
  • Reading 2A:  Overview of Metaphysics.  William F. Lawhead.  The Philosophical Journey:  An Interactive Approach, 5th edition.  Boston: McGraw-Hill 2011, pp. 202-211





Academic Integrity: As members of an academic community engaged in the pursuit of truth and with a special concern for values, University of Detroit Mercy students must conform to the highest standard of honesty and integrity in their academic work. The fundamental assumption under which the University operates is that work submitted by a student is a product of their own efforts. Among the most serious academic offensives is plagiarism, submitting the ideas or work of another source without acknowledgement or documentation. The consequences of plagiarism or any act of academic dishonesty may range from failure in a course to dismissal from the university.

Note that the key here is acknowledgement and documentation of sources.  If you do these two things, then you are not plagiarising.  Whether you are paraphrasing or directly quoting a source, it must be acknowledged and documented.   Writing this paper does not require any sources other than the assigned readings, but make sure you cite any and all sources you use.  

Paper Grading Rubric Fall 2023
Name:________________________________________

____________ Points Letter grade:____________

Introduction:  summarise what you will do in the paper (about ½ - ⅔ of a page – 5 points)

   A    B    C          D    F
  5   4    3                2               1
(a)  Summarize the Allegory by describing the stages in the prisoner’s journey out of the Cave.  What surprising claim does Socrates make about what Glaucon calls these “strange prisoners?”  Next, explain what kind of reality the world of the Cave represents in Plato’s thought by explaining the “two realms” in Plato’s metaphysics.  (about 1 ½ - 2 pages – 20 points)

 A   A-        B+  B B-       C+  C  C- D+ D      F

   20- 18.5      18-16                  15-13.5               13-12         11-0    

(b)  Integrating your understanding of Reading 2A, Reading 4, and Reading 4A, fully explain Plato’s metaphysical dualism, by completing the five tasks in the prompt (about 1 ½ -2 pages – 25 points). 
 
   A  A-       B+  B B-        C+   C   C-        D+   D                F
   25-23                          22-20        19-17             16-15 14-0

(c)  Impact on you and current application to human beings:  What lessons did you learn from the Allegory of the Cave?  What impact did the reading have on you?  Did Plato’s discussion of education resonate with you?  Do you think the Allegory applies to us now? How do we mistake appearances for reality and what are the consequences of this?  (1-2 pages - 10 points)

   A    B    C          D    F
  10-9   8    7                6               5
Writing, Clarity, Style:  15 points
   A  A-         B+   B B-        C+    C    C-   D+   D        F
15 – 14           13.5 -  12.5            12 -   10.5        10 - 9       8-0

Introduction:  clearly summarizes what the paper is about and briefly describes the effect of the Allegory on the author.

(a)  Summary of the Allegory
A, A- :  completes all three tasks very clearly, with sufficient detail for the reader, can paraphrase and present material with a good degree of originality, shows clear understanding of the text.
B+, B, B- :  completes all three tasks fairly clearly, with sufficient detail for the reader, less original paraphrase, greater reliance on exact wording of readings.
C+, C, C- :  completes two out of three tasks with serious clarity issues and overreliance on course material, little to no originality of presentation.
D+, D :  only completes one task with serious clarity issues and overreliance on course material, little to no originality of presentation, shows less understanding of text.
F :   doesn’t complete any of the tasks in the prompt.

(b)  Plato’s metaphysical dualism
A, A-:  completes all five tasks very clearly, with sufficient detail for the reader, can paraphrase and present material with a good degree of originality, including examples.
B+, B, B-:  completes all five tasks fairly clearly, with sufficient detail for the reader, less original paraphrase, greater reliance on exact wording of readings, fewer examples.
C+, C, C- :  completes four of five tasks with serious clarity issues and over reliance on course material, little to no originality of presentation, or does three of the tasks very clearly.
D+, D :  only completes three tasks with serious clarity issues and over reliance on course material, little to no originality of presentation.
F :   only completes one or two tasks with serious clarity issues.

(c)    Impact of the Allegory   
A: answers 4-5 questions in the prompt clearly and in some detail, clear evidence of serious thought about the reading.
B:  answers 4-5 questions in the prompt with slightly less clarity and detail, less evidence of serious thought
C:  answers three questions without much clarity or detail, but with some evidence of serious thought.
D:  answers one or two of the questions without much clarity, and little to no evidence of serious thought.
F:  fails to say anything about the Allegory

Writing, Clarity, Style:  15 points 

A, A- (20-18.5):   the author does all of the following:  (1) meets basic formatting requirements:  
typed, double-spaced, Times New Roman 12 font, no extra spaces between paragraphs, numbered stapled pages, works cited page; 
(2) uses appropriate citations – including Stephan's numbers - to cite specific parts of texts, and gives complete information on these texts in a works cited page; 
(3) demonstrates understanding of basic writing mechanics:  
(3a)  capitalisation is appropriate;
(3b) use of commas, periods, semicolons, and question marks is correct;
(3c) is not excessively wordy or redundant;
(3d) uses proper syntax and places grammatical units in the proper order in the sentence;
(3e) avoids spelling errors;
(3f) avoids sentence fragments and run-on sentences;
(3g) avoids passages or sentences that the reader simply cannot understand.
(4) the paper is well organized both at the level of the entire paper and within each paragraph;
(5) there are appropriate transitions between paragraphs/ideas
(6)  the author always introduces, explains, and smoothly incorporates quotations
(7)  the author summarizes the paper in an Introduction
(8)  the author explains what s/he has learned from the Allegory in a conclusion,
B+, B, B- (18-16):  the author does at least 6 of 8 elements above well.
C+, C, C- (15.13.5):  the author does 5 of the above 8 elements.
D+, D (13-12): the author does 4 or fewer of the above 8 elements well.
F (11-0):  the author does 3 or fewer of the above 8 elements.


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